I will be posting videos for you to watch at home that will take a look at the work students are producing as we compose weekly. These videos are meant for you to see what others are doing. The videos are meant for you to notice some issues that need to be taken care of. I expect that you watch these videos and make sure that you do not make the same errors as I point out in the videos! I also want you to take note of how well some of you are doing with their pieces they are writing! These videos will also be a way for the rest of you to take note of that fact as well and maybe step it up a notch or two!
Here is the first video –
Here is the second video –